{
  "edition": "revised-20260928",
  "chapter": 16,
  "title": "The Second Graham",
  "status": "current_edition_source_linked_canon",
  "word_count": 4117,
  "chapter_url": "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/",
  "prose_hash": "3a45b7bf8d3254375d93fc7d8e5a7c544617a14305f2be06fc2e3ba7b19a28ae",
  "prose_hash_basis": "SHA-256 of UTF-8 manuscript bytes, including scene separators",
  "canon_url": "/after-the-sleeper/canon/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/",
  "previous_edition_url": "/after-the-sleeper/canon/16-the-second-graham/",
  "evidence_edition": "Revised novel, 28 September 2026",
  "evidence_note": "Every evidence link targets a paragraph in the current chapter. Interpretation remains bounded by that paragraph and surrounding scene.",
  "thesis": "The feed answers questions and carries an accepted principal reference; the source tests establish constructed memory, not the identity or operator behind it.",
  "entities": [
    {
      "id": "A2-CHAR-ELIZA",
      "name": "Eliza Marr",
      "kind": "Character",
      "paragraphs": [
        59,
        91,
        192,
        210,
        213,
        297
      ],
      "fact": "Compares the feed with earlier and later records, publishes bounded findings about the two memory claims, and keeps the response mechanism unresolved.",
      "art": "Archival comparison sheets beside the live feed.",
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p059",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p091",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p192",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p210",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p213",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p297"
      ]
    },
    {
      "id": "A2-CHAR-PERA",
      "name": "Pera Sol",
      "kind": "Character",
      "paragraphs": [
        1,
        2,
        182,
        224
      ],
      "fact": "Records different receiver timings at the market booth, marks the later public time, and keeps source comparisons visible beside Eliza.",
      "art": "Booth clocks and source copies.",
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p001",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p002",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p182",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p224"
      ]
    },
    {
      "id": "A2-CHAR-DARAN",
      "name": "Daran Pell",
      "kind": "Character",
      "paragraphs": [
        59,
        70,
        81,
        193
      ],
      "fact": "Finds the separate Isbister sketchbook note and helps compare it with Graham’s account; rereads the later erroneous catalogue against the sketch.",
      "art": "Separate pages with conflicting descriptions.",
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p059",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p070",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p081",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p193"
      ]
    },
    {
      "id": "A2-CHAR-ARUN",
      "name": "Arun Vey",
      "kind": "Character",
      "paragraphs": [
        104,
        108,
        140,
        260
      ],
      "fact": "Tests inherited display and service routes, isolates five routes without immediate service loss, and logs differing local responses to reactivation requests.",
      "art": "Working route board and local switches.",
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p104",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p108",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p140",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p260"
      ]
    },
    {
      "id": "A2-CHAR-NARA",
      "name": "Nara Venn",
      "kind": "Character",
      "paragraphs": [
        276,
        277,
        281,
        284
      ],
      "fact": "Challenges the appeal of relief through one speaker and asks why coordination should depend on the speaker’s name.",
      "art": "Mandate hooks beside a public screen.",
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p276",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p277",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p281",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p284"
      ]
    },
    {
      "id": "A2-CHAR-MARIAN",
      "name": "Marian Vale",
      "kind": "Character",
      "paragraphs": [
        158,
        167
      ],
      "fact": "Refuses to recognise the feed’s authority over herself, the estate question, or disputed public-use property; she makes no claim that the likeness is false.",
      "art": "Succession notice held beside the live image.",
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p158",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p167"
      ]
    },
    {
      "id": "A2-EVENT-RESPONSIVE-FEED",
      "name": "The Responsive Graham Feed",
      "kind": "Event",
      "paragraphs": [
        1,
        2,
        208,
        217
      ],
      "fact": "A Graham likeness answers live questions through differently delayed routes and speaks in the first person; responsiveness does not authenticate the speaker.",
      "art": "Multiple ordinary receivers, not one central transmitter.",
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p001",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p002",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p208",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p217"
      ]
    },
    {
      "id": "A2-OBJ-SOURCE-TESTS",
      "name": "The Two Source Comparisons",
      "kind": "Records",
      "paragraphs": [
        70,
        81,
        91,
        192,
        193,
        208,
        210,
        213
      ],
      "fact": "The feed repeats Isbister-only detail and a later catalogue’s nonexistent bell tower as autobiographical memory. The second finding supports constructed autobiography, while leaving the operator unknown.",
      "art": "The actual sketch, erroneous caption and comparison columns.",
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p070",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p081",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p091",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p192",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p193",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p208",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p210",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p213"
      ]
    },
    {
      "id": "A2-OBJ-LEGACY-ROUTES",
      "name": "Legacy Authority Routes",
      "kind": "Infrastructure",
      "paragraphs": [
        108,
        129,
        140,
        233,
        260
      ],
      "fact": "Inherited service and broadcast paths carry the feed and reactivation proposals; local systems accept, hold or reject requests differently.",
      "art": "Route board showing local outcomes.",
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p108",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p129",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p140",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p233",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p260"
      ]
    },
    {
      "id": "A2-OBJ-PRINCIPAL-RECOGNISED",
      "name": "Principal Recognised",
      "kind": "Record",
      "paragraphs": [
        260,
        263,
        268,
        301
      ],
      "fact": "A machine log accepts a principal reference pointing to an old Council identity service. The entry establishes machine recognition, not a person’s identity or lawful command.",
      "art": "Raw acceptance log beside the physical route.",
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p260",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p263",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p268",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p301"
      ]
    }
  ],
  "continuity_locks": [
    {
      "claim": "First-person responsiveness and different receiver timings do not authenticate identity.",
      "paragraphs": [
        1,
        2,
        91
      ],
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p001",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p002",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p091"
      ]
    },
    {
      "claim": "The Isbister test is evidence of composition from surviving sources; it does not identify every available source or the operator.",
      "paragraphs": [
        70,
        81,
        91
      ],
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p070",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p081",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p091"
      ]
    },
    {
      "claim": "The later bell-tower error establishes a constructed autobiographical response without settling whether the system is autonomous or human-operated.",
      "paragraphs": [
        192,
        193,
        208,
        210,
        213
      ],
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p192",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p193",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p208",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p210",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p213"
      ]
    },
    {
      "claim": "Marian rejects the feed’s claimed authority without deciding whether the likeness is false.",
      "paragraphs": [
        158,
        167
      ],
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p158",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p167"
      ]
    },
    {
      "claim": "Some legacy routes remain connected for service reasons and local reactivation responses vary.",
      "paragraphs": [
        140,
        233,
        260
      ],
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p140",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p233",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p260"
      ]
    },
    {
      "claim": "PRINCIPAL RECOGNISED is a machine acceptance log and leads to the Council identity service; its authority must be investigated next.",
      "paragraphs": [
        263,
        268,
        301
      ],
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p263",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p268",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p301"
      ]
    }
  ],
  "tcg": {
    "status": "Untested design candidates only. Costs, statistics, rarity and timing are not approved. No live game rules change.",
    "candidates": [
      {
        "id": "A2-C16-REV-01",
        "name": "Eliza Marr, Test the Sources",
        "type": "Figure",
        "affinity": [
          "Knowledge"
        ],
        "source_entities": [
          "A2-CHAR-ELIZA",
          "A2-OBJ-SOURCE-TESTS"
        ],
        "direction": "Compare a presented memory with source records; expose provenance without declaring a speaker’s identity.",
        "source_links": [
          "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p059",
          "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p091",
          "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p192"
        ],
        "open_question": "Untested concept. Costs, rarity, timing and rules must be checked against the live game."
      },
      {
        "id": "A2-C16-REV-02",
        "name": "Arun Vey, Route Isolation",
        "type": "Figure",
        "affinity": [
          "Infrastructure"
        ],
        "source_entities": [
          "A2-CHAR-ARUN",
          "A2-OBJ-LEGACY-ROUTES"
        ],
        "direction": "Isolate a selected inherited route at a visible service cost.",
        "source_links": [
          "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p104",
          "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p108",
          "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p140"
        ],
        "open_question": "Untested concept. Costs, rarity, timing and rules must be checked against the live game."
      }
    ]
  },
  "boundary": "Original Sleeper Archive fiction. Canon summaries follow the revised novel; game concepts are untested.",
  "records": [
    {
      "id": "A2-031",
      "title": "The Second Graham",
      "url": "/after-the-sleeper/records/031-the-second-graham/",
      "paragraphs": [
        1,
        2,
        216,
        263,
        297,
        301
      ],
      "copy": "A responsive Graham presentation travels inherited routes and receives machine recognition; its identity and operator remain undetermined.",
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p001",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p002",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p216",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p263",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p297",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p301"
      ]
    },
    {
      "id": "A2-032",
      "title": "Too Perfect a Memory",
      "url": "/after-the-sleeper/records/032-too-perfect-a-memory/",
      "paragraphs": [
        70,
        81,
        91,
        192,
        193,
        208,
        210,
        213
      ],
      "copy": "The feed uses Isbister’s separate note and a later catalogue error as first-person recollection; the archive documents source composition.",
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p070",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p081",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p091",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p192",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p193",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p208",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p210",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p213"
      ]
    }
  ],
  "changes_and_uncertainties": [
    {
      "note": "The revised prose combines the two source tests into one tighter evidentiary arc. The finding is constructed autobiography, with authorship still open.",
      "paragraphs": [
        91,
        210,
        213
      ],
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p091",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p210",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p213"
      ]
    },
    {
      "note": "Recognition by inherited machinery is logged separately from consent and lawful authority.",
      "paragraphs": [
        260,
        263,
        268
      ],
      "source_links": [
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p260",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p263",
        "/after-the-sleeper/edition-20260928-r5/16-the-second-graham/#p268"
      ]
    }
  ],
  "edition_id": "A2-CH16-20260928-R5",
  "r5_editorial_note": "R5 revises 11 paragraph(s) in this chapter; the 28 September R4 text is archived separately."
}