A surviving logistics-wing commander who returns with aircraft, external depot relationships and an insistence on unified tactical command in flight. He openly separates airborne command from civil mission authority and preserves black-seal requests without claiming to know their sender or motive.
Avoid a generic heroic officer portrait. Stronger compositions are the patched aircraft at the western field, Rook at the weather-room map, or the visitor-mark scene at the square.
A2-CHAR-KORR · Character
Eda Korr
Rook's quartermaster and fuel officer, responsible for usable aircraft counts, parts, fuel and ground logistics. She repeatedly narrows impressive headline numbers into operational ones and signs the fuel schedule rather than the air command itself.
Leather work apron, ledgers, fuel valves and mechanics distinguish her from formal command staff. No ornamental military uniform is established.
A2-CHAR-NARA · Character
Nara Venn
Carries the assembly's insistence on reasons, local mandates and explicit limits into negotiations with the air service. She witnesses receiving-court procedure but does not sign for every district or claim authority over Rook's pilots.
Use the established Organiser continuity if needed, preferably in relation to the field fence, visitor mark or mission sheet rather than as a standalone leader image.
A2-CHAR-ARUN · Character
Arun Vey
Treats the air service as another system dependent on fuel, maintenance and technical refusal. His contribution is to define technical limits and separate them from civil allocation rather than to command the aircraft.
Engineer under a wing with fuel and service records; no pilot gear or air-command insignia.
A2-CHAR-MARIAN · Character
Marian Vale
Rejects the idea that an air force can simply be discovered inside her possible inheritance. At the field she questions what Rook actually commands and leaves the eventual air agreement unsigned.
A field-side conversation or map-room observer; no ownership or command symbolism.
A2-CHAR-ELIZA · Character
Eliza Marr
Examines the three black-seal depot requests as preserved records, insists on complete packages and custody chains, and does not convert their accepted credentials into a claim about motive, common authorship or operational legitimacy.
Use comparison documents and custody cases over a formal character portrait.
A2-CHAR-AMEL · Character
Amel Ryn
Brings receiving-court reality into the air negotiation by challenging the nine-day grain estimate, providing revised court counts and keeping food distribution central to a discussion otherwise dominated by aircraft and command.
Food-table records beside flight planning are the useful motif; do not convert her into air staff or a military aide.
A2-PLACE-WESTERN-FIELD · Place
The Western Landing Field
A damaged municipal freight platform becomes the immediate interface between Rook's aircraft, municipal ground control, fuel staff, engineers and receiving courts. No single actor controls every function on the field.
A glass-sided room above the field becomes the negotiation table for air command, grain escort, black-seal evidence and the temporary agreement. Its large map makes overlapping jurisdictions visible.
Wide table-and-map scene with windows onto the airfield; no throne-like head position.
A2-OBJ-AIRCRAFT-COUNT · Operational roster
Thirty-Seven Aircraft
Rook reports thirty-seven aircraft that flew within four days, but Korr distinguishes thirty-one she would send on a long escort without further mechanical inspection. The larger number is not the same as reliable long-range capacity.
Roster with operational, restricted and inspection-needed columns; no invented aircraft statistics.
A2-OBJ-REGISTERED-GRAIN-DAYS · Supply estimate
Registered Issue Days
Rook's initial nine-day grain claim is based on municipal issue returns. After receiving-court data challenges it, he relabels the figure REGISTERED ISSUE DAYS and the later estimate falls between seven and eight under current rationing, still subject to missing households.
Crossed-out heading changing DAYS OF GRAIN to REGISTERED ISSUE DAYS; no absolute starvation countdown.
A2-OBJ-THREE-AUTHORITIES · Operating framework
Mission, Flight and Ground Authority
The negotiation separates civil mission authority, Rook's command once aircraft are airborne and local control of landing, fuel and ground safety. The fourth column—what happens when they disagree—remains the difficult part.
Three-column operational sheet plus an intentionally open disagreement column.
A2-OBJ-BLACK-DEPOT-REQUESTS · Records
The Three Depot Requests
Three eastern depot controllers accept credentials from the abolished preservation office: fuel release, relay priority and holding two aircraft for reassignment. Rook countermanded them locally. Their wrappers are preserved; sender and motive remain unidentified.
Three separate machine receipts with custody wrappers; do not merge them into one sinister master order.
A2-OBJ-STANDING-FLIGHT-RULES · Operational record
The Standing Flight Rules
Separates recurring flight-safety rules—weather, pilot command, emergency diversion and technical refusal—from the civil purpose of each mission. It is not a permanent grant of sovereignty over the air.
Two-sheet layout: standing flight rules beside a mission-specific sheet.
A2-EVENT-FIRST-GRAIN-ESCORT · Event
The First Grain Escort
Seven aircraft launch after one is removed for mechanical concerns. One later remains at the eastern field after an oil-pressure warning; six return with the grain convoy. No air battle occurs. The food delivery, not combat, is the mission's practical success.
Returning grain carriers with aircraft high above, emphasizing logistics rather than combat.
A2-OBJ-FORTY-EIGHT-HOUR-AIR-AGREEMENT · Temporary authority record
The Forty-Eight-Hour Air Agreement
A temporary agreement defines civil missions, airborne command, field safety, technical fuel limits, depot conditions and records obligations for forty-eight hours. It expires automatically unless renewed and does not declare who governs the air as a whole.
Prevents consultation at one Place from being treated as a broad control grant, while still allowing the underlying mission to proceed if another valid authority exists.
Open design question: Target only one transfer/control effect so this remains readable.
Revises a public resource estimate when a second source is introduced. The revision changes planning without generating or destroying the physical resource itself.
Open design question: Use visible resource totals and avoid hidden arithmetic or starvation counters.
Stores multiple related authority claims without declaring common authorship. A later verification effect may compare them, but possession alone cannot identify a culprit.
Open design question: Keep uncertainty explicit and prevent the card from becoming a generic search tutor.
Moves an existing supply through a declared route under temporary protection; an aircraft may be withheld for reliability without cancelling the whole mission.
Open design question: Map escort to current movement rules rather than introducing aerial combat resolution.
Creates a temporary authority window with an explicit expiry; renewal requires the same categories of consent rather than becoming automatic permanence.
Open design question: Use existing turn/round timing and ensure expiry cannot be trivially reset forever.
Chapter 14 follows the western-entrance attack. The eleven deaths and memorial board remain part of the city's immediate context.
The black mark at the Chapter 13 attack remains evidence of a mark, not proof of the attacker. Rook's depot requests do not resolve that attribution.
Rook has thirty-seven aircraft that flew recently, but Korr distinguishes thirty-one suitable for a long escort without further inspection. Do not treat 37 as uniformly mission-ready.
The grain estimate begins as nine days based on municipal registered issue and is explicitly relabelled and revised after receiving-court data. Do not use nine days as an omniscient citywide fact.
Rook commands agreed flight operations; he does not become sovereign over London, the depots, receiving courts or every aircraft-related decision.
Mission authority, flight authority and ground receiving/safety authority remain distinct. Later chapters may show conflicts among them.
The first grain escort encounters no combat. One aircraft remains at the eastern field after a warning; six return to London with the convoy.
The eastern depots and station retain their own conditions and ownership relationships. London cannot simply order their grain or runways.
Marian signs no air-command agreement and does not claim the aircraft through succession.
Nara witnesses receiving-court procedure only; she does not sign for all districts.
The three black-seal depot requests are preserved with wrappers. Sender, motive and relationship to the bombing or false Graham remain unknown.
The forty-eight-hour agreement is temporary and expires unless renewed. It is not a constitution or a permanent air ministry.
Chapter 15 must inherit overlapping civil, technical, district and air jurisdictions rather than a newly unified government.
Existing Chapter 9 artwork, Chapter 5 notes, Archive 001 content and live game rules remain unchanged.